It was reaching summer, only a week to go. Brendon and Melissa wanted to go to Europe for the summer. They finally had enough money. Working 2 jobs,taking extra shifts, working as hard as they could.
Brendon thought to himself and just remember about planning the trip. Then he also remembered that Melissa said she would do it. “Melissa did you plan our trip.” said Brendon.
“yes i did i planned it for us to go in two days.”Melissa responded. So from there Melissa and Brendon started to pack. They were almost ready to go.
The next day came in play and it was the day to go to Europe. they knew it would take a little while to get there so they sleeped on the plane. finally Melissa told Brendon where they were going in Europe. which there going to Italy Rome. they wanted to plan what places to go and see. Melissa and Brendon were two different people but madly in love. Brendon liked to walk around and see the places and judge them from the outside. and Melissa loved the old things to go in and to see everything she was into history.
Brendon and Melissa arrived in Italy but they still didn't have any clue what places they wanted to go to and see. Brendon agreed with Melissa about be able to go around and look at all the attractions.
Melissa started plan what places she wanted to go with Brendon. First she wants to go to the The Pantheon. The most intact building from antiquity in the world, an architectural wonder set right on the heart of the centro storico, the historical center. and next the Church of San Clemente. Step back into the many layers of Roman history -- the first evidence of the Italian language, an altar of the secret cult of Mithras, an actual ancient alley of the city. these are the two places melissa dreamed about for life times. brendon wasent really into these kind of things but he would pretend to be for melissa he loved her.
“ Melissa do you want to order room service” brendon yelled into the bath room. Melissa yelled back “sure hun if you want to”. “ok” brendon said. “do you know what I want” Melissa said “hun I have been with you for two years i know what you want” brendon said annoyed.
by the time melissa got out of the shower, room service was there. her and brendon sat down and ate some dinner. after dinner brendon wanted to go out and drive around. but melissa was tired and she wanted to rest. so brendon left and went by himself. hours later and he came to the hotel with no one in the room. he looked around and screamed melissa a hundred times she wasent yelling back. it was possible that she got kidnaped. italy rome was a huge place it would be so hard to find her.
looking out the window what he thought was melissa but wasent he found that out. running out and grabbing the lady she turned around and smacked him. i thought you were someone else sorry. young man you dont go around grabbing people thinking there some one else. looking for her would be hard. he started to think of all the places a kidnapper would talk someone. italy is a big place. with alot of people. he wouldnt get a night of sleep intil melissas there with him safe and sound.
it was really dark out and he could barely see anything. he looked to this dark corner and saw a figure of a person.he went to go look who it was maybe it would be melissa. it turnes out it was melissa she had bruses all over. he ran over and picked her up trying to get her to talk about what happend she didnt say anything she was scared for her life.
they got back to the hotel room and he told her to go take a nice warm shower and then he would take care of her and try to get out what happend. sitting there looking at her on the bed not even being her self he couldnt take it. he jumped up “WHAT HAPPEND” brendon yelled. melissa said fine sit down ill tell you. he sat down and melissa started telling him. “ i went down to the lobbie and there were these three guys that i thought were nice,they came up to me and started to talk, after that i went to go out to get some fresh air and they came behind me and grabbed me. they put me in this truck next thing i knew they were all ganging up on me and started to beat me. it was dark i couldnt see there faces. then they just left me there in that corner. then you came in found me.” melissa told the whole story. brendon didnt know what to do. then it came to him we have to go to the police. no melissa screamed i didnt see there faces so it wouldnt be important. brendon wanted to do something about this but he couldnt melissa didnt know what they looked like so it was no use. so they went on with there vacation. going place to place trying to pretend it didn't happen. Melissa started to recover slowly. she was still frightend it would happen again. besides what happend the trip was good.
i think this is a relly good story. it is very nice to read. i think you could have more explaning. in the storey.
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